Officially.
Speaker AWelcome to Hot Breath, the winner of the April Clean comedy Contest.
Speaker AScott Shanahan, a finalist the past three months and now a winner.
Speaker AHow does it feel?
Speaker BIt feels great.
Speaker BI was.
Speaker BI was just thinking, it's always the bridesmaid, never the bride.
Speaker BIt was, you know.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker BStory to have won.
Speaker AYeah, that's great.
Speaker AWell, what we'll do is you want a landslide on our live finale.
Speaker AYou know, every month we do this contest, and then we do a live stream finale where the top three finalists show their sets, and then the viewers vote.
Speaker AAnd you want a landslide today.
Speaker ASo we should play your set for anyone listening to the podcast who wants a feel for the champ himself, and then we'll talk about it.
Speaker BOkay, cool.
Speaker CMy daughter's at that age where she gets embarrassed by me when I exist.
Speaker CShe told me it embarrasses her that I flirt with her teacher all the time.
Speaker CShe's home schooled.
Speaker CShe told me my clothes embarrass her.
Speaker CShe wears the same hoodie every day.
Speaker CThat's like if Keith Richards told you you need to get sober or Taylor Swift told you you need to chill out on the relationships.
Speaker CShe told me she gets embarrassed by the way I talk.
Speaker CThen she said, skibidi, riz, Ohio.
Speaker CI don't even know what that means.
Speaker COne time, I embarrassed her by calling her sweetie in front of her friends.
Speaker CShe calls me bruh.
Speaker CShe told me that she gets embarrassed by the fact that I joke around all the time.
Speaker CI told her these jokes put food on the table.
Speaker CMy wife said, that's the funniest joke you ever told.
Speaker CMy wife gets embarrassed by me, too.
Speaker CBut when we show up at somebody's house and they say, make yourself at home, my pants are coming off.
Speaker CShe told me that it embarrasses her that I talk so much during church.
Speaker CI'm the preacher.
Speaker AYes.
Speaker AWell done.
Speaker AWell done, Scott.
Speaker AAnyone that wants to compete in next month's contest, you can go to cleancomedycontest.com But, Scott, take us through the set.
Speaker AI mean, the amount of jokes.
Speaker AThere's a reason you've been a finalist every month this year is because the amount of jokes.
Speaker ABut kind of take us through what.
Speaker AHow do you write such a good set in two weeks?
Speaker AWhat's your secret?
Speaker BOh, I don't know.
Speaker BI just.
Speaker BThat's a good question.
Speaker BYou know, you did a.
Speaker BYou did a.
Speaker BAn interview with Earthquake, and it's my favorite Hot Breath interview so far.
Speaker BI mean, and I love all of them, but that one is really, really good.
Speaker BAnd he Said, and this.
Speaker BI kind of live by this.
Speaker BHe said that comedy is a truth that becomes a lie.
Speaker BAnd so I think I just kind of think of things that have happened or could have happened or maybe sort of happened, and then I just sort of, kind of extrapolate them or exaggerate them until they become funny, I guess.
Speaker BSo, you know, my daughter got a little bit irritated with me because she actually likes it when I joke around.
Speaker BAnd she didn't really say that it.
Speaker BThat she gets embarrassed by the fact that I joke around all the time.
Speaker BBut one of her friends wasn't kind of like irritated with me for joking around too much.
Speaker BAnd so I kind of turned it, the truth into a lie, and then it becomes funny.
Speaker BSo there you go.
Speaker BAnd that's one thing.
Speaker BI just kind of think about those things and try my best to get as many jokes in, as many laughs in the minute as I can.
Speaker BSo.
Speaker AYes.
Speaker ASo the.
Speaker AThe truth was that it's actually your daughter's friend that gets annoyed, but for the joke.
Speaker AYou made it your daughter.
Speaker BYes, exactly.
Speaker AYeah, yeah, I've heard.
Speaker AYeah, go for it.
Speaker BI was gonna say, wouldn't, you know, like, if.
Speaker BCause the whole.
Speaker BThe theme was me embarrassing my daughter just by being her dad, you know, and then.
Speaker BAnd so like, to.
Speaker BTo say, well, my daughter's friend got embarrassed, but you're, you know, annoyed or whatever.
Speaker BThat really wouldn't be on theme.
Speaker BSo.
Speaker AYeah, yeah, that's.
Speaker AI was gonna say, like, I've heard Sebastian Maniscalco say he'll.
Speaker ASometimes the truth of his joke will be that, like, his neighbor said something to him, but he'll make it his dad just for the sake of the joke because now it's more personal and it ties into other material he has.
Speaker ASo you can always kind of bend life to.
Speaker AFor comedic effect.
Speaker AA lot of do that.
Speaker ASo you're basically Sebastian Maniscalco, is what I'm saying.
Speaker BThat's right.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker BI am in Italy, so.
Speaker BAnd he's.
Speaker BHe's Italian American.
Speaker BSo we.
Speaker BMaybe we'll meet up someday.
Speaker BI don't know.
Speaker AOh, yeah.
Speaker ADo you.
Speaker AYou do shows out there?
Speaker AYou're in.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker AWow.
Speaker AYou speak Italian.
Speaker BI do.
Speaker BI do shows in.
Speaker BIn English and Italian and it's very challenging in Italian because it doesn't like my English stuff.
Speaker BSometimes I can translate it, but sometimes you can't because, like, there's little plays on words and stuff.
Speaker BAnd so the.
Speaker BBut, yeah, but.
Speaker BSo I do Italian shows.
Speaker BI haven't done one in a while.
Speaker BI've been Doing more English shows lately, but because I'm coming to the States this summer and I'm going to be doing some shows and so I kind of need to be in practice for English.
Speaker BSo.
Speaker BYep.
Speaker AWe're doing a show together on June 20th.
Speaker BWe are?
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker BIn Atlanta.
Speaker AIn Atlanta.
Speaker AThe.
Speaker AThe theater, they went on sale pre sale this week.
Speaker ASo once they go on public sale, we will be sure to let the hot breath verse know all around the Atlanta area.
Speaker AThey got to come see us in action.
Speaker BAwesome.
Speaker AYeah, Very nice.
Speaker AIt's such.
Speaker AIt's very nice.
Speaker AI'm very excited about the show.
Speaker AIt's at the Sandy Spring performance Arts Center.
Speaker AIt's the real deal.
Speaker ASo, you know, you win the contest, you may get booked kids.
Speaker ASo you just.
Speaker AYou just never know.
Speaker ABut for your last per minute and how many jokes you're getting in, like how many.
Speaker AAnd by the way, you're the wife joke.
Speaker AMy wife laughed.
Speaker AYou know, we always watch all the sets together.
Speaker AAnd the wife joke, she laughed at the loudest.
Speaker AAnd I was like, oh, is that relatable?
Speaker AIs that what you're laughing at?
Speaker BBut maybe.
Speaker AWhat is up?
Speaker AWhat is your favorite joke of this set?
Speaker BI kind of like the.
Speaker BI.
Speaker BI really.
Speaker BI guess the.
Speaker BThe one that I like the most was I told my daughter these jokes put.
Speaker BPut food on the table.
Speaker BAnd my wife said, that's the funniest joke you've ever told.
Speaker BI like that.
Speaker BAnd then I also like the one about she gets embarrassed that I talk too much during church.
Speaker BBut I'm the preacher and I would like to have, you know, with more than a minute that I would have extrapolated that more.
Speaker BI like that.
Speaker BI like that one too.
Speaker BAnd that one is not a truth.
Speaker BThat became a lie.
Speaker BShe's never told me.
Speaker BI talk too much during two.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker AAnd I mean, yeah, the dinner one is what.
Speaker AThe putting food on the table is the one my laugh at.
Speaker AMy wife laughed at the loudest.
Speaker ABut go.
Speaker AI cut you off there, Scott.
Speaker AWhat do you got?
Speaker BIt's funny.
Speaker BNo, that's no problem.
Speaker BNo, I was just gonna say the funny thing about this set was I actually filmed that.
Speaker BWe were staying in a hotel on Monday night, coming back to our home city here, and I actually had to film that in the hotel bathroom.
Speaker BAnd I was really afraid that it would be obvious that I was in a bathroom and that would get me disqualified, But I don't think it did.
Speaker BSo.
Speaker ABy any means necessary.
Speaker ASo your family is in the hotel room and you're just in the bathroom.
Speaker ASaying sillies into your phone.
Speaker BYes.
Speaker BI tried to do it in the hallway, but it was too echoey, and there was, like, people.
Speaker BI could hear people in their rooms.
Speaker BAnd then I tried to do it in the car, but it was too dark, and so I went to the bathroom.
Speaker AThat.
Speaker AThat's one of my favorite parts about the contest, is just picturing people in their day.
Speaker ALike, it's like, there's dads or moms that'll be doing this contest.
Speaker AAnd I.
Speaker AI can just imagine if growing up, my mom was just in her bedroom screaming at her phone, these, like, ridiculous jokes, and she's like, all right, dinner time.
Speaker AAnd I'm just like, what were you doing in there?
Speaker AHaving a.
Speaker ALike, a mental breakdown.
Speaker AAnd then you come out here in an apron, like, everything's fine.
Speaker ALike, it's just.
Speaker AIt's funny to see people there.
Speaker AI picture their daily life versus them doing, like, comedy.
Speaker AIt's just like a.
Speaker AIt's like a Clark Kent and, like, Superman or something.
Speaker BYeah, that was a unique experience for me.
Speaker BThis time.
Speaker BI was gonna try to do it on stage, but I just didn't have shows that lined up right with it.
Speaker BAnd then also on stage, I'm a little bit.
Speaker BOne of the contests I did.
Speaker BI did film the set on stage, but it ended up going kind of way over a minute because there was, you know, pausing and stuff.
Speaker ASo killing so hard.
Speaker AThe laughter was so long that you just.
Speaker AToo much.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker AMost people just do, like, a talking head video, but some will, like, submit a stage set.
Speaker AIt doesn't.
Speaker AIt.
Speaker AI've had people ask me what's better.
Speaker AIt's kind of.
Speaker AIt's personal preference.
Speaker AWe don't.
Speaker AIf it became down to, like, sets, them being on stage wouldn't be, like, the deal breaker or the difference maker.
Speaker AIt comes down to those three grading criteria.
Speaker AWe talked about the beginning of the live stream, so.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker APersonal preference for people if they want to post one from stage or not.
Speaker AIt's kind of whatever you want to do there.
Speaker ABut, yeah, the timing is different on stage versus when you're doing a talking head.
Speaker AThings can happen.
Speaker AYou could flub a line or whatever, because I know people will film 50 takes of their sets to get it right and within that time frame.
Speaker BSo, yeah, this one I think I did.
Speaker BI did fewer this time.
Speaker BI think I did five or six takes, but usually I'm.
Speaker BI'm up to 20, 30 takes because I.
Speaker BWow.
Speaker BOr something.
Speaker BOr something will happen.
Speaker BThe phone.
Speaker BA few times I've, like.
Speaker BI'LL set the phone up on something.
Speaker BThis time I just held it in my hand, but I'll set the phone up on something and it'll fall.
Speaker BYou know, we have this pet bird that is like the loudest thing ever.
Speaker BAnd, and I'll be in the middle of a joke and he'll, he'll whistle or something even if I'm so.
Speaker BIt can be challenging.
Speaker AWe need to have people in the, the contest Facebook group share outtakes.
Speaker AThat would be so funny.
Speaker AThen freaking out or like almost to the end and then they flub a line and they're just like cussing at themselves or whatever.
Speaker AThat would be so funny to see.
Speaker AOr, or the phone falling.
Speaker AOh, that would be funny way.
Speaker ARao asked, if you always have smart twists and misdirections, how do you train for that?
Speaker BYeah, I don't know that I always do, but that is sort of my preference when I write, I try to like, I try to, you know, do the misdirection.
Speaker BAnd basically I kind of always think, like, where would I think this was going?
Speaker BAnd now how can I change that?
Speaker BUm, I don't know.
Speaker BIn this one, I, I guess I don't know that I have that many misdirections in this one.
Speaker BBut yeah, I just kind of like think, well, where, where would my mind naturally go if I were hearing this?
Speaker BAnd then, okay, so how can I do the opposite?
Speaker BOr how can I surprise, you know?
Speaker AYeah, so, yeah, you had, yeah, you, your sets are always packed with Mr.
Speaker AX, you know, and you had the, the church when I'm the pastor and like the homeschool.
Speaker ASo when you come up with, yeah, take us through kind of how you write, how you write one liners.
Speaker ABecause right now it's like, okay, this month's theme was embarrassment.
Speaker ASo now that you have the theme now, where do you start?
Speaker AAnd then how do you end up with a tight 60 second set?
Speaker AKind of take us through your whole creative process because you've been in the finals every month, so you're doing something right.
Speaker BWell, so, yeah, I just, I kind of.
Speaker BOn this one, I started thinking and actually a lot of times I start.
Speaker BAnd last month I remember starting with one idea and then going in a totally different direction.
Speaker BThis one.
Speaker BI was just thinking about things that have happened to me in my life that are embarrassing.
Speaker BAnd I have one story that it's funny, like at the dinner table.
Speaker BAnd I just don't know if it would be that funny on stage, you know, which is that I went into the wrong bathroom at this Movie theater one time.
Speaker BAnd that's where I was starting with, because I remember I went in there and I was like, oh, that's weird.
Speaker BI've never seen a men's room with no urinals in it before.
Speaker BAnd then I don't like urinals, so I like.
Speaker BI hate them anyway, so I was like, oh, this is great.
Speaker BThis is now my favorite men's room on earth.
Speaker BIt turns out it was the women's room, but so that's where I started.
Speaker BAnd about, you know, three or four days of working on that, I thought, you know, I just.
Speaker BI just don't know that I can get it exactly right.
Speaker BAnd so then I started thinking about how kids generally get embarrassed by their parents.
Speaker BAnd my daughter's pretty good about not getting too embarrassed by me, but she does get.
Speaker BI do embarrass her kind of a lot with certain rules that I have to follow.
Speaker BLike at school, drop off and pick up and stuff to.
Speaker BTo not.
Speaker BYou know, I started thinking about.
Speaker BAlong those lines, and then I started thinking about different things that, you know, that have.
Speaker BMaybe that I've done or that I could have done.
Speaker BAnd then with my wife, that stuff was.
Speaker BI kind of.
Speaker BI thought about the getting embarrassed by the jokes I tell, and then my wife saying, well, that's the funniest joke, you know, and what are some things that I could say that maybe embarrassed my wife?
Speaker BAnd I only came up with two, but I was trying to, like, in months past, I'll do, like, you know, in 60 seconds.
Speaker BIt's kind of crazy that this can happen.
Speaker BI'll have, like, four different subjects in that 60 seconds.
Speaker BAnd I wanted to really stick with one.
Speaker BOkay, this is one thing that, you know, in this case, my daughter for the whole minute, instead of, like, just jumping from subject to subject, even though I would still stay on theme of embarrassment.
Speaker BAnd so I got to about the 42nd mark, and I had a couple other ideas, and I thought, well, maybe I'll just shift to my wife.
Speaker BAnd then.
Speaker BAnd also, I'm always thinking about my other sets and how I can connect them.
Speaker BAnd I don't know if you have noticed that, but in these months that I've participated in this, they're generally always about my family.
Speaker BSo one of the good things about this contest is I have, like.
Speaker BI think I've done four of them, so.
Speaker BAnd then.
Speaker BSo I have four minutes that I've submitted, but it's all on family.
Speaker BSo, like, if I do that on stage, it's not a one minute bit and then another one minute bit and then another one minutes bit.
Speaker BI have a four minute bit that can connect, I can connect it all.
Speaker BAnd I probably got, probably got about five minutes out of this contest, which is awesome.
Speaker AWow.
Speaker AVery clever.
Speaker AMaking it all on theme and then each contest can kind of tie into the next.
Speaker ASo you're actually building a set in addition to just like a contest submission, right?
Speaker BYeah, because, I mean, that's one of the things I love about this.
Speaker BAnd I almost didn't.
Speaker BI was thinking about not joining this month and I said, well, no, but it really, it makes me write a full minute, you know, and people, if anybody's watching this, that's not a comedian, you wouldn't, you wouldn't believe how hard it is to get a minute.
Speaker BLike, you know, yeah, it's, you know, there's times where you might write, you know, five minutes and right away, like, you might be able to do it really fast.
Speaker BBut then there's times where, you know, you're lucky if you can get a one liner, you know, in a week.
Speaker BYou know, just, it's so, it's really, really tough.
Speaker BAnd so this contest has been really good for me and I really appreciate you doing it.
Speaker AYeah, I appreciate you participating and taking it so seriously.
Speaker AAnd that is something in like the contest Facebook group, the first week people will be like, I have nothing.
Speaker AOr what do we like?
Speaker AUsually it's kind of like pressure makes diamonds and it's kind of like it's an accumulation and there's a compound effect of if you just write a little bit every day.
Speaker ABy middle of the second week, you start to find breakthroughs and stuff will start to come together.
Speaker AAnd then maybe the day of submissions, you're still organizing stuff and you're still adding stuff.
Speaker AAnd as you do different takes, you kind of think of new ideas or different ways to organize the set.
Speaker ASo it all, it does have that compound effect of you can overthink it and be like, oh, I have nothing in a week.
Speaker AThis is a waste.
Speaker AOr if you just keep trusting the process, by the end of that second week, you're going to have a great set.
Speaker ANo one really submits sets where my wife and I are like, yee.
Speaker AOr like I feel bad for them or any, like everyone is taking it seriously.
Speaker AAnd that's why I still do it, because people, I'm seeing the results from it and people are taking it seriously.
Speaker AAnd that's, that's very rewarding just to see as well.
Speaker ASo I appreciate you taking this contest Seriously.
Speaker BWell, I love.
Speaker BSo a couple things I was going to say.
Speaker BFirst of all, I have never.
Speaker BI have never not recorded Monday afternoon.
Speaker BLike, I always think I'll record like Friday and get it done, and it's always Monday afternoon.
Speaker BI'm like, okay, I've got to get this done.
Speaker BLet me just settle on my minute, you know?
Speaker BAnd then the other thing I was gonna say is I actually love.
Speaker BI.
Speaker BI would say, you know, if you had.
Speaker BYou said 30 or so people participate, and I bet 15 or so posts there videos.
Speaker BAbout half, maybe, maybe a little more than that.
Speaker BPost their videos in the Facebook group.
Speaker BAnd I.
Speaker BAnd I love it.
Speaker BI love watching them.
Speaker BI don't know really how you narrowed it down, because I thought this month everybody was really strong, you know, everyone I saw.
Speaker BAnd I hope that everybody, if any of the guys, any of the folks are listening that have participated, if it's okay to do it, I think we can.
Speaker BWe can share them in the main group, I think.
Speaker BAnd I guess.
Speaker BI think Bobby said, yeah, you could.
Speaker APost them in there too.
Speaker AYeah, for sure.
Speaker BI think the other people who are in the group who aren't participating in the contest, that might motivate them to participate too.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker AAnd it is tough to narrow it down.
Speaker AThat's why we have that.
Speaker AThe three criteria we look at is how on theme is it, how unique is the set to this comic.
Speaker ALike, how unique is it in their voice and their point of view and then just how many jokes are in the set.
Speaker AAnd that.
Speaker AThat is like kind of the guiding light.
Speaker AWhen we watch 30 sets and then we still have 15 open.
Speaker ALike, oh, gosh, how do we.
Speaker AIt's like a gradual whittle down and there's like debate.
Speaker ALike, we.
Speaker AShe's like, I know.
Speaker AI like this better.
Speaker AI was like, yeah, but it's.
Speaker AThere were many jokes, as in this one, and that had maybe a few bigger jokes, but there were fewer and they didn't really carry.
Speaker AThey didn't hold up the set or.
Speaker AThe first half was strong, but then the second half kind of faded.
Speaker ALike, there's.
Speaker ASo those three criteria really help us to stay on task of whittling it down.
Speaker ABecause, yeah, it's not.
Speaker AIt's not easy.
Speaker AEvery month we'll have a handful, and we're just like, oh, gosh, I slept on this one.
Speaker ALike, we had.
Speaker AWe whittled it down to five, and then I was just like.
Speaker AI was like, I got to sleep on it and I'll rewatch it in the morning with fresh eyes.
Speaker AAnd.
Speaker AAnd was able just to kind of look at it through those three criteria and be like, okay, bottom line, this is the.
Speaker AThe three criteria.
Speaker AThese sets fit the best into that.
Speaker ABut the goal is hopefully, like you said, people, if anything, even if they don't win or make it to the finals, they still have new jokes that they can do on stage.
Speaker AAnd that's.
Speaker AThat's the big.
Speaker AThe big winner for everyone there.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker BAnd if.
Speaker BAnd if you stick to that theme.
Speaker BNot theme, sorry, stick to those criteria, you.
Speaker BYou're gonna have a good set.
Speaker BBecause, I mean, obviously, if you have jokes, that's gonna be good, but if you can make them, especially making them personal and then.
Speaker BAnd then making them funny obviously is big, but that making them personal is really, really important.
Speaker BI actually had a joke stolen here.
Speaker BThere was a guy that stole a joke for me, but it wasn't a big deal.
Speaker BIt was actually more like a tag that I didn't love.
Speaker BAnd then.
Speaker BBut I heard him doing it, and I was like, man, how are you?
Speaker BBut he kind of.
Speaker BHe changed it just enough that it was like, okay, you know, it could be kind of generic, but how did he love that joke anyway?
Speaker BSo I said, well, he can just have it, so.
Speaker AYeah, yeah, yeah, yeah.
Speaker AAnd actually used your.
Speaker ABecause some people will sign up for extra feedback on their.
Speaker ATheir sets when they submit their final one for me to give them a set review of.
Speaker AAnd actually used for one comic.
Speaker AUsed your set as an example because they were asking about how to add or, like, what would have made this set more likely to be in the finals.
Speaker AAnd it came down to, like, jokes per minute.
Speaker AIt's like, they had jokes, but they were too spart.
Speaker AThey were too spaced out.
Speaker AAnd I shared your link.
Speaker ABe like, here's an example of just like, joke, joke, joke, joke, joke, joke, like, throughout the 60 seconds.
Speaker ASo how.
Speaker AHow do you feel like a comic looking to pack more punches into their set?
Speaker AWhat would you recommend?
Speaker AOr how are you able to just, like.
Speaker AIt's just like, tight jokes, jokes, jokes.
Speaker AHow are you able to pack so many in?
Speaker BWell, first of all, thank you.
Speaker BThat's a huge compliment that you did that.
Speaker BThat really.
Speaker BThat makes me.
Speaker BActually, I think that's even almost better than winning the contest.
Speaker BBut the.
Speaker BI mean, that's.
Speaker BThat's huge.
Speaker BThanks.
Speaker BNo, you edit.
Speaker BYou've got it.
Speaker BYou've got to just, like, take out anything that doesn't help the joke.
Speaker BAnd, you know, when I first started, like, everybody, I would have these long setups, you know, because I just Felt like, well, they need this information in order to get the joke I'm trying to tell.
Speaker BAnd it turns out you really don't.
Speaker BYou know, you just, you know, with embarrassment, you should intend.
Speaker BIn that first 10 seconds, you should be able to say something like, you know, you know, I don't embarrass easy.
Speaker BYou know, and then you could say, and this is stupid.
Speaker BI'm just.
Speaker BThis is off the top of my head.
Speaker BOkay?
Speaker BBut, like, I don't.
Speaker BI don't embarrass easy.
Speaker BI grew up with an Irish Catholic mother.
Speaker BThat's not.
Speaker BThat's not funny.
Speaker BBut it is a setup punchline.
Speaker BAnd so, like, if you can just get to.
Speaker BYou can just write as many of those as you can.
Speaker BI don't embarrass easy.
Speaker BWhy?
Speaker BWell, because of this, because of this, because of this.
Speaker BAnd if you write as many of those as you can, you'll have a joke in four, four or five seconds.
Speaker BAnd, you know, let's say you write 20, 19 of them will not be very funny, but you will get to one that will be funny.
Speaker BAnd then.
Speaker BAnd now you do your next.
Speaker BAnd it's.
Speaker BAnd so for me, with, like, with my daughter, I was thinking, okay, she gets embarrassed by me.
Speaker BLike, you know, when.
Speaker BWell, at school.
Speaker BDrop off at school.
Speaker BPickup.
Speaker BWhen we're with her friends.
Speaker BWhen we're with family.
Speaker BNo, just when I'm alive.
Speaker BJust being alive embarrasses her, you know.
Speaker AIt kind of came to you as you were brainstorming other examples, right?
Speaker BExactly.
Speaker BI kind of thought about, like.
Speaker BI was like, oh, well, this is just everything.
Speaker BEveryday life, you know, and so.
Speaker BAnd then I changed it.
Speaker BI changed it to.
Speaker BFrom being alive, I changed it to existing.
Speaker BI just thought existing was sort of a funnier, Funnier way to say it.
Speaker BAnd then I.
Speaker BAnd then again, it's like, you know, anytime, you know, like, I gotta.
Speaker BI get embarrassed at work.
Speaker BOkay, now, you know, whatever.
Speaker BI don't have to say I get embarrassed at work.
Speaker BI, you know, I'm a house painter.
Speaker BI've been doing that for 15 years.
Speaker BAnd.
Speaker BAnd, you know, like.
Speaker BOr something.
Speaker BYou know what I mean?
Speaker BLike, you don't need all that.
Speaker BJust what is it at work that makes you embarrassed?
Speaker BAnd just try to get it whittled down as best as you can.
Speaker BAnd that's the goal.
Speaker BAnd I know that, you know, when I look at my, like, my very first sets that I ever did, it's like, my goodness, would you just tell a joke?
Speaker AIt's just like, yeah, yeah, yeah.
Speaker AWhen you.
Speaker AWhen you're writing a one liner, you mentioned.
Speaker AI'd like to drill down on a little bit more because I think being able to write one liners would really help people in this contest specifically and on stage.
Speaker AI did one liners for probably the first five to seven years of my career.
Speaker ALike, I was all one liners.
Speaker ASo when you.
Speaker AWhen you do write a one liner.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker AYou said you kind of think about what I would think about, assume about this, and then you misdirect it.
Speaker ALike, how do you.
Speaker ALike you have a setup and then how do you get to, like a funny twist?
Speaker BYeah, I guess.
Speaker BI don't know, maybe just the way my mind works.
Speaker BI actually would like to get into more stories and into more, you know, into longer, Longer bits, because I do.
Speaker BI do a lot of one liners.
Speaker BAnd what happens is I'll write a one liner and then I just tag it and tag it and tag it, and then it's.
Speaker BIt's a longer bit because that's basically like, even this one is basically, you know, it's the one line and then it's just a bunch of tags, you know, until I get to the stuff about my wife.
Speaker BBut anyway, so I would like to actually sort of expand from that.
Speaker BBut writing one liners, you know, one of my.
Speaker BOne.
Speaker BOne of my one liners that does really well is, oh, it's already set up because, you know, people know I'm married.
Speaker BAnd so I'll say, you know, I love my wife.
Speaker BShe has one annoying habit, heroin.
Speaker BAnd that one.
Speaker BI generally get a good laugh on it.
Speaker BAnd basically what I was thinking about with that was like, okay, well, I'm gonna say I love my wife.
Speaker BBut, you know, everybody, every relationship, no matter how close you are, there's something that drives you crazy.
Speaker BAnd I kind of thought about the word.
Speaker BYou know, I was thinking about some things that maybe she really does.
Speaker BShe does not do.
Speaker BShe does not do heroin, by the way, anybody watching this?
Speaker BAnd.
Speaker BAnd I was thinking, you know, if I actually said something that she really does, that might hurt her feelings, so I better not say that.
Speaker BAnd then I thought of the word habit, and I was like, oh, heroin, a heroin habit that, you know.
Speaker BAnd so nobody, nobody in the audience is thinking she has one annoying habit.
Speaker BIt's going to be heroin or crack or meth or something like that.
Speaker BYou know what I mean?
Speaker BAnd so what's the most surprising thing I can say right now, you know?
Speaker AYeah, so you kind of do.
Speaker AYou'll have the setup and be like, and then brainstorm.
Speaker AWhat is the audience thinking when I say this?
Speaker AThen you'll think of, okay, what's the most surprising thing I could say?
Speaker ASay to, like, almost like misdirect.
Speaker ABasically, you'll kind of list setups and then punch lines in that way.
Speaker AI'm trying to, like, if someone's like, how do I write a one liner, I guess, you know.
Speaker BYeah, so I'll do.
Speaker BAnd this time I did actually use the mind mapping on this one, which I've never.
Speaker BI've not done a lot of that.
Speaker BBut if, if you know about it, it was actually pretty helpful to me.
Speaker BBut yeah, I'll write, you know.
Speaker BSo again, for this, this set, you know, my daughter says I embarrass her.
Speaker BWhat are some things that could embarrass her?
Speaker BAnd then what are some reactions I could have to that?
Speaker BYou know, she says she gets embarrassed by the way I dress.
Speaker BAnd.
Speaker BOkay, she wears the same hoodie every day.
Speaker BNow, in her defense, she goes to a school where they have a uniform and the uniform is a hoodie.
Speaker BSo it's.
Speaker BYou have to wear it.
Speaker BI mean, until now, but now it's getting warmer, so they won't be wearing that anymore.
Speaker BBut anyway, and I was like, okay, so now you know.
Speaker BNow let me write down.
Speaker BSo what are these?
Speaker BYou know, what are reactions to that?
Speaker BAnd I actually had a bunch of analogies.
Speaker BI had one that was like, you know, that's like I ended up with Keith Richards and Taylor Swift.
Speaker BBut I had.
Speaker BThat's like if a homeless guy told you you have to get your life together.
Speaker BThat's like, if an illiterate told you you're an idiot, you know, And I had like, I mean, I just wrote.
Speaker BI mean, I wrote as many of those as I could, and then I settled on those two at the end.
Speaker BAnd I'm not sure what made me choose those, but.
Speaker ANice.
Speaker BI don't know that I'm explaining the process very well, but the idea is to write as many of them as you can and then choose the one that's going to be the most surprising or that's going to get the strongest reaction.
Speaker BI have another joke in my set, and this is kind of funny because I actually told this.
Speaker BI told him.
Speaker BWait, it was this.
Speaker BI'm trying to think if I told.
Speaker BIf I'm going to say the one that I told him.
Speaker BBut my dad.
Speaker BMy father died a couple years ago.
Speaker BIt's actually almost two years ago this month.
Speaker BAnd he had a great sense of humor.
Speaker BAnd when he was like.
Speaker BAnd went while he was dying, not to take a dark turn here, but I was with him the last couple of days, and I told him, I said, I'm going to tell this joke, and he thought it was hilarious.
Speaker BAnd so the joke is, my father died recently.
Speaker BWe had him cremated, and we think that's what killed him.
Speaker BAnd that was.
Speaker BAnd he.
Speaker BHe thought that was hilarious.
Speaker BAnd, and, and again, again, it's just not.
Speaker BNot something you're expecting, you know.
Speaker BAnd so, you know what?
Speaker BAgain, it's just always.
Speaker BWhat can I say?
Speaker BYeah, that they're not going to accept.
Speaker BAnd so sometimes what you can do, write the expectation, you know?
Speaker BRight, right.
Speaker BLike, you know, my dad died recently.
Speaker BI really missed him.
Speaker BI really miss him, you know, and then what, you know, what can I say that would.
Speaker BWould change that, you know?
Speaker BYou know, so my dad died recently.
Speaker BI really miss him.
Speaker BYou know, I loved him a lot because he paid my rent or, you know, something like that, you know, like, just.
Speaker BI just.
Speaker BThat was one that popped into my head anyway.
Speaker AIt's a good example.
Speaker BOh, thank you.
Speaker BYou know, thank you.
Speaker BSo, yeah, just kind of like.
Speaker BAnd just think about, like, that's.
Speaker BThat's a good way to do it.
Speaker BLike, what would be a real thing?
Speaker BLike.
Speaker BLike that earthquake interview.
Speaker BAnd then what's his.
Speaker BYou know, what's the lie that makes it funny?
Speaker AYou know, and it's a volume game, like you said, you know, you may write 20 and only keep one of them.
Speaker AIt's being willing to put in that extra work to find the jokes.
Speaker BYeah, exactly.
Speaker BAnd it's hard, you know, I have a job, so I can't, like, spend four hours a day writing.
Speaker BBut if you can, just anytime you get free time, you know, if you.
Speaker BIf you have.
Speaker BEven if you're in the car, don't write in the car, but record yourself.
Speaker BYou know, like when you're on your commute, just turn on.
Speaker BYou have a phone, it's got a recorder.
Speaker BRecord yourself and think your way through the things and then listen back to it and then write it down when you can.
Speaker BYou know, I don't know my.
Speaker BI just.
Speaker BThumbs up.
Speaker AYou did Thumbs up.
Speaker AI wonder if that's a YouTube.
Speaker BDid you see that?
Speaker AI saw that, too.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker BThat was weird.
Speaker APeople on the podcast are loving that.
Speaker AThey're like, wait, what happened on the video that we can't see?
Speaker AYeah, okay.
Speaker AVery cool, though.
Speaker BYeah, that was it.
Speaker BSo anyway, so just.
Speaker BYeah, so try to find the time and, you know, if you want to get better that's, that's what you'll do, you know, even if you're working.
Speaker AYeah, yeah.
Speaker AWhen I had a day job, I would write during my lunch break.
Speaker AYeah, you just kind of find and carve time when you can.
Speaker AThat's why the Right 10 Club exists in the writing Facebook group at 10am and 10pm just have a nice little 10 minutes just to carve out of your day, to just work on your comedy.
Speaker BSo, you know, I, I love.
Speaker BThat has really helped.
Speaker BSo my writing has improved.
Speaker BThere were.
Speaker BI stumbled upon you on your podcast.
Speaker BI don't know how I found it, but I stumbled upon it.
Speaker BAnd you had an interview with Jerry the joke, Dr.
Speaker BJerry Corley.
Speaker BThat's it.
Speaker BAnd so I found that.
Speaker BAnd he.
Speaker BAnd I.
Speaker BAnd I watched his videos and I got his book and that helped me a ton.
Speaker BAnd then write 10 really, really helped once I found that and I started really taking it seriously and doing it every day, even though it's in 10 minutes.
Speaker BAnd I'll never forget the first game I won.
Speaker BAnd I don't remember the joke, but John Molehill wrote, commented and said, this is.
Speaker BThis is stage ready.
Speaker BAnd he said, and by the, you know, and he says, I do.
Speaker BI said, I do this every day.
Speaker BAnd I've probably added five minutes in the last year to my act just doing this.
Speaker BAnd.
Speaker BAnd he's right.
Speaker BI mean, I've written, I've gotten a lot out of it, and I can, I can take them even if I don't win.
Speaker BAnd winning is secondary at this point.
Speaker BYou know, I just want to do the writing and I.
Speaker BAnd you can take them and then you can build off of those too, you know, to get more time.
Speaker BThat's what we're all after.
Speaker BMore time.
Speaker AYeah, exactly.
Speaker AYeah, that's a.
Speaker AYeah, that's a great point.
Speaker AAnd yeah, people have really enjoyed all the episodes I've done with Jerry and said they've been very helpful.
Speaker AAnd I'll link.
Speaker AYeah, his book.
Speaker AHis book is a really good one.
Speaker AI'll link in the show notes for people listening the podcast or on the live stream as well, because it's, it's been a good resource for a lot of people out there just trying to get better.
Speaker BYou know, it's, it's, it's funny.
Speaker BI was, you know, I mentioned in my set I am a preacher.
Speaker BThat is true.
Speaker BOver here in Italy and when I was learning to preach, I, you know, I read all these books on it and then.
Speaker BAnd none of them were all that helpful.
Speaker BThey all Helped a little.
Speaker BAnd then I found this one that really helped a lot because it taught, like, a system for writing sermons, you know?
Speaker BAnd then I read a ton of books on comedy.
Speaker BAll of them have helped some, but Jerry Corley's, because he has, like, a system and he talks about.
Speaker BI think it's like the 11 laugh triggers or the nine laugh triggers.
Speaker BI can't remember how many there are.
Speaker BBut, you know, if you get that book, if you're serious about comedy, because it's expensive.
Speaker BIt's not.
Speaker BIt's one of the most expensive books on comedy out there.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker BBut if you're really serious about.
Speaker BAbout comedy, get it, because it will help you a lot.
Speaker BIt helped me.
Speaker BIt changed me.
Speaker BAnd your.
Speaker BYour interviews always.
Speaker BI.
Speaker BI mean, they just.
Speaker BThey, they.
Speaker BThey always help me.
Speaker BThey always motivate me, and I.
Speaker BI just.
Speaker BI love it.
Speaker BI love the Hot Breath channel, and I'm really happy to be part of the Hot Breath fam.
Speaker BSo you're in.
Speaker AYou're in the Hot Breath verse.
Speaker AYou're on the show, the same show as Jerry Corley, and Earth look at you in Earth.
Speaker BBut I'm also curious, do you have.
Speaker BMaybe you would be.
Speaker BYou wouldn't necessarily want to say, but do you have a favorite that you've done, a favorite interview or one that's been, like, the most helpful to you?
Speaker BOh, gosh, I should put you on the spot.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker AIt's so hard to.
Speaker AIt's so hard to pick one out of the hundreds.
Speaker AThere's been so many.
Speaker AIt's hard to pick.
Speaker AI mean, Mark Normand is probably one of my favorites just for.
Speaker AHe's one of the ones that I've.
Speaker AI've interviewed several times throughout his career.
Speaker ASo, like, when he was struggling to sell out a club to then he was, like, doing.
Speaker ASelling out everywhere to now, like, doing theaters.
Speaker ASo he's a good one.
Speaker AAnd he's a comedy nerd and loves talking game as well.
Speaker AYes.
Speaker BYes.
Speaker BI really like that his interviews that he's done with you are great.
Speaker BAnd I love that you got to, like, you said this to.
Speaker BI can't remember.
Speaker BIt was a couple weeks ago.
Speaker BYou did one that was another really good one.
Speaker BBut you.
Speaker BYou often get people right before they pop off.
Speaker BAnd with Mark Norman, I really think, like, you got to him.
Speaker BAnd then, like, within the next year, he was everywhere, you know?
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker AI think I just said that about Derek Stroop.
Speaker BDerek Stroop.
Speaker BThat's what it was.
Speaker BYeah.
Speaker AEric Stroop was the one who yeah, he's.
Speaker AHe's about to be huge, too.
Speaker AHe's killer.
Speaker ASee how there's too many.
Speaker AI can't pick a favorite.
Speaker ABut, yeah, it's.
Speaker AIt's a lot of fun to do, for sure.
Speaker AIt's very, very rewarding.
Speaker BYou're over 400 at this point, aren't you?
Speaker BLike, I mean, 450ish, maybe.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker AI would need to look at the exact number, but, yeah, I know.
Speaker AIt's.
Speaker AWe've had over 400 episodes.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker BThat's awesome.
Speaker AIt's fun.
Speaker AYeah.
Speaker ANow you're one of them.
Speaker BSo there we go.
Speaker BThere we go.
Speaker BI don't know how much time we have, but I have told you this before in a message, but I'll tell the hot breath Averse.
Speaker BThe first open mic I did was in Atlanta at the Laughing Skull Lounge.
Speaker BIt was on a Tuesday night, and I had some friends that were coming, and I was like, well, I want to, like, do it with nobody there that I know in case I, like, just embarrass myself, you know, I'll drop out.
Speaker BSo I went to this open MIC at Cloud 9 in Atlanta, and I signed up.
Speaker BI was.
Speaker BI was the first one there.
Speaker BI was the first one to sign up, and they ended up not putting me on.
Speaker BBut during the open mic, and for, you know, this.
Speaker BDon't nobody read anything into what I'm about to say, but this is a.
Speaker BIt's a black venue.
Speaker BMost.
Speaker BMost everybody there, most everybody on the lineup was black.
Speaker BBut this white boy walks in and starts doing his thing, and it was hilarious.
Speaker BAnd I had no idea.
Speaker BI was like, who was that guy?
Speaker BAnd I made the connection several years later, after I'd been in Hawkworth for a while, and it was you.
Speaker BYou were the guy.
Speaker BI think you dumped me.
Speaker BI think, like, I could have one.
Speaker AWhite guy on the show, my boy Joe.
Speaker BAnd it was you.
Speaker BSo, yeah, so I actually saw you many.
Speaker BIt's been like 10 years ago now.
Speaker BYeah, I did the next night and it went well, so I ended up doing it again.
Speaker ASo, yeah, Cloud 9 was.
Speaker AThat was a Monday night favorite.
Speaker AI would go there every Monday.
Speaker AAnd, yeah, I mean, those are the type of shows I could all.
Speaker AThose are the only ones that would put me on for several years was those type of shows.
Speaker ASo I just went where I could get stage time and that there were several shows I sat through.
Speaker ALike you said, you show up early, you're first on the list, and then they don't put you up.
Speaker AOr even worse, they'll be like, oh, I got you stay around, I got you in a few.
Speaker AAnd then they never put you up or I got you next.
Speaker AAnd then they don't put you up and they say, oh, I forgot, hold on, I have to put up so and so.
Speaker AAnd then I'll put you up or come back next week and I for sure got you and then come back next week and then still don't get up.
Speaker ASo those are all the fun parts of comedy that a lot of people don't see or talk about or don't want to endure to actually become a professional comedian.
Speaker ABut that's all part of the, the game.
Speaker ASo that's so funny.
Speaker AYou saw me at Cloud nine.
Speaker AThat was so long ago.
Speaker AI used to go there every Monday and wow, that is so funny.
Speaker AI'm glad it went.
Speaker BYeah, you did great.
Speaker BYeah, it was, it was really good.
Speaker BAnd you were, I remember you were like walking around you at one point there was like this pole in the middle of the floor and you're like touched it and you were saying something about, I don't know, you did something.
Speaker BI can't remember.
Speaker AI used to break the walls and do all sorts of weird stuff.
Speaker BBut it was great.
Speaker BI loved it.
Speaker BAnd it's been a long time ago.
Speaker BAnd then here we are now, not face quite face to face, but in face to face and not real life, virtually face to face.
Speaker AWe'll be doing a theater together in June.
Speaker ASo.
Speaker BYeah, June 20th.
Speaker AJune 20th.
Speaker AIt's gonna be exciting.
Speaker BSo can't wait.
Speaker AWhere, where could people follow you or keep up with you and support you or ask you questions or just say, hey, this is a great episode.
Speaker BSo I have a Facebook page and Instagram page and a threads page.
Speaker BI don't have X or TikTok.
Speaker BI've never done them.
Speaker BI probably should.
Speaker BAnd they're all Scott Shanahan comedy.
Speaker BAlthough, yeah, Scott Shanahan comedy.
Speaker BEven on Facebook, I usually, I don't, I need to use that one more and my Instagram more.
Speaker BI do a lot on threads because the way I write where I write a lot of one liners, it just works really well on that platform.
Speaker BI don't know if people know, even know about threads.
Speaker BIt's basically the new Instagram text, social media or something like that.
Speaker BIt's, it's, it's gonna.
Speaker BEventually it'll be the exact same as everything else.
Speaker BThat's how they always go.
Speaker BBut, but I do a lot there and I do some on Instagram and I do, I post some on Facebook.
Speaker BAll always.
Speaker BScott Shanahan.
Speaker BComedy.
Speaker AGreat.
Speaker AAwesome.
Speaker AWell, yeah.
Speaker AHot breath averse.
Speaker AGo follow Scott.
Speaker AGo tell him you enjoyed this episode and compete in next month's contest.
Speaker AIf you want to join and compete and write new jokes with other comics, you can go to cleancomedycontest.com and maybe you can hear yourself on this show next month.
Speaker BMaybe.
Speaker ASo, Scott Shanahan, I appreciate your time, buddy, and congratulations.
Speaker BI appreciate you, man.
Speaker BThank you.
Speaker BThank you.
Speaker AHave a good day, my friend.
Speaker BYou, too.
Speaker BBye.
Speaker BHot breath.
Speaker AReverse hot breath.